Lilith, Adam's Disobedient Precursor to Eve, or Seductive Feminine Demon?
On 2014-01-29 19:49:25.108980 by Kelly
- I like the link between Greek Mythology and topic of Lilith
- I also like the question you had about Lilith between the Babylonian version and the Bible version.
-I was hoping you'd elaborate more on the question you'd proposed
On 2014-01-29 19:46:51.105090 by Sean McIntyre
I liked the progression of Lillith that you put together well in your presentation.
I liked how you were able to put your own thoughts into your interpretation of Lillith.
I would try to have a more concise question that you are trying to answer in your next presentation.
On 2014-01-29 19:45:37.151110 by Eliana
Plus: clearly delivered
Delta: use participatory activities/multimedia
On 2014-01-29 19:44:11.448500 by Owen Dix
+Good connection to the Bible
+Good Knowledge of the topic
Try to keep the audience engaged
On 2014-01-29 19:43:55.610500 by Emily Kern
+: Good pacing, easy to follow.
+: You sounded comfortable and pretty knowledgable on your topic. As a result, you sounded confident!
∆: This only happened once, but try not to look up at the screen.
On 2014-01-29 19:43:38.201570 by Anonymous
+ Good hand motions; they work well for you
+ You did a pretty good job of focusing in a broad topic
^ Your ending was not fantastic...maybe rehearse a little more
On 2014-01-29 19:43:20.761250 by Paulina
+ Good connections
+ well structured
On 2014-01-29 19:43:20.760440 by Jesse Metzger
Liked the I use of many pictures
Words were a little small and hard to read
On 2014-01-29 19:43:17.690540 by Talya
In the show True Blood, Lilith is believed to be their vampire goddess. The mother of vampires.
On 2014-01-29 19:43:09.622620 by Aex S.
+ the question you asked was really interesting and made me want to learn more
+ The connection to Greek mythology was interesting and brought the topic to a new place
delta: some of it seemed unplanned. Maybe make more notes/outlines of what to say?
On 2014-01-29 19:42:53.596410 by Amiya Seligman
Plus - I think you do a good job of introducing the two version of Lilith and introducing the question of women as being subservient.
Delta - Maybe end differently? A summary or a new question?
On 2014-01-29 19:42:41.329450 by Lillia
(delta)Seemed to be missing a thesis
+visuals went well
On 2014-01-29 19:42:30.451050 by Anonymous
Super organized and easy to follow. Images were also very helpful
On 2014-01-29 19:42:29.127000 by Adina Kruskal
+ you kept good eye contact with the audience and had a calm, relaxed tone, that made it clear that you were prepared.
+ you had lots of interesting sources and nice pictures that clearly reinforced the points you were saying.
delta - I had trouble following your driving question... was it just "what are the different depictions of Lillith?" Maybe make it a little clearer or state it outright.
On 2014-01-29 19:42:18.944520 by Susannah
- Made good connections to things we knew about (Bible)
- The color scheme of the slide was a nice compliment to the topic
- Maybe be more clear with what your saying, it was hard to understand at times
On 2014-01-29 19:42:14.520120 by Avianna
^Slides were kind of hard to read (on the projector, not the laptop)
On 2014-01-29 19:42:07.312360 by Aj jablon
Dude a lot of words. Check yourself. But good and informative slides, solid presentation man
On 2014-01-29 19:41:24.195160 by Alex Fabry
- Good question posed in an interesting way
- The colors on the powerpoint made it a little difficult to read on from the projector
On 2014-01-29 19:40:49.751710 by Eric
Good flow in speaking
Watch your enunciation, you slurred a couple words I missed.
On 2014-01-29 19:40:01.429630 by Ayyyyyjay
On 2014-01-29 19:39:46.896960 by Pat
Pluses- thorough research, nice cultural connections , good speaking voice and pace
Delta- color scheme of presentation was too dark, although I get why it fit the theme